I believe its aimed at federal employees because they believe that because they hold government jobs that they are allow to do what most can't like texting while driving. Its a good law that they made because its make the roads safer from government snobs and promotes safety all over for everyone. Students can use this as an example to be safe and drive without texting. For example "My cousin works on capital hill and she doesn't text while driving".
This article starts with the main idea of the whole article. it says straight out what you are going to be reading about in the article. when they used quotes they came across as if if the person was just talking to you and telling you what someone said. it goes in the article naturally. towards the middle of the article the writer starts to narrow down and talk about specific times people used cellphones, and research against cellphones.
Lead: gives the who and the what, provides just enough information to draw the reader in without give the whole article away. It gets straight to the point and has a natural flow.
This Article Uses The Pyramid Method. It Starts out With A lead that give out what the story is about. It also answers, who is banning it, what is being banned, when is it being banned, where is it being banned, and why.
*TEXTING* - i believe that federal employes are on aim because, there are people that are looked at, because there looked at alot more then other people since they messed up. elections for them people care where there money going and who running law, other people who cares there not making a difference in another life like th federal people are.
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I believe its aimed at federal employees because they believe that because they hold government jobs that they are allow to do what most can't like texting while driving. Its a good law that they made because its make the roads safer from government snobs and promotes safety all over for everyone. Students can use this as an example to be safe and drive without texting. For example "My cousin works on capital hill and she doesn't text while driving".
This article starts with the main idea of the whole article. it says straight out what you are going to be reading about in the article. when they used quotes they came across as if if the person was just talking to you and telling you what someone said. it goes in the article naturally. towards the middle of the article the writer starts to narrow down and talk about specific times people used cellphones, and research against cellphones.
Lead: gives the who and the what, provides just enough information to draw the reader in without give the whole article away. It gets straight to the point and has a natural flow.
Texting While Driving
This Article Uses The Pyramid Method. It Starts out With A lead that give out what the story is about. It also answers, who is banning it, what is being banned, when is it being banned, where is it being banned, and why.
-Marlyn
*TEXTING*
- i believe that federal employes are on aim because, there are people that are looked at, because there looked at alot more then other people since they messed up. elections for them people care where there money going and who running law, other people who cares there not making a difference in another life like th federal people are.
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